Your interpretation of the prompt is really stunning. I love that there is a sense of tension that the characters, who can only wait to discover the truth, seem to be feeling. And how comparatively the reader feels a totally different kind of suspense because we know what happens next.
I also love the structure of it, it's appealing to the eye, and the placement of the section about Harry between the two about Remus again creates a sort of suspense in its atmosphere.
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Date: 2008-08-08 02:43 pm (UTC)I also love the structure of it, it's appealing to the eye, and the placement of the section about Harry between the two about Remus again creates a sort of suspense in its atmosphere.
Uhm, I'll shut up now. :x